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S.S.B.R. [Prologue and Chapter 1:Rise Of Thy Revolution]

Posted by TheFlameAlchemist - September 17th, 2009


Prologue
After the brawl era it was a peaceful planet and at the time Bowser was caged and Petey Piranha was burned too bits and master hand and crazy hand have been taut up that way they couldn't move or do any tricks.Yes,peace was a good sign at the moment until someone or something unexpected had broken out and now a new group of heroes must conquer the new evil that approaches...

[Chapter 1:Rise Of Thy Revolution]

Meanwhile in a underground laboratory in the mushroom kingdom under Bowser's abandoned castle."HaHaHaHaHaHa!My project is complete after very very long years of work he is finally complete!*Presses a button that opens a tube*You...are...Piranha-X54 also known as Patrick Piranha but, we will go with Piranha-X54 shall we?"said the evil Kamek who took Bowser's castle as his own and chose to continue on his project that he started a very long time ago which is now completed and called his project Piranha-X54."Now!Obey!I am your master,your king, and your creator!Rise!"commanded Kamek.Piranha-X54 responded"...No...I am your master and your king.I have seen your ways and I will be stronger and I want this world to be mine...and mine it shall be!"yelled Pirahna X54."WHAAAT!No you shall belong to me and destroy my enemies!"replied Kamek."Why me then?Why?"asked Piranha-X54."Becuase I who am not strong enough have infused most of my powers into you which has increased your mental abilities,speed,strength, and maybe you got some of my magic abilities."Responded Kamek with an unfair grin."Then I am much stronger than you correct?"asked Piranha-X54."Why of course!Then again you can't underestimate me!"responded Kamek."Then this must be no trouble then."said Piranha-X54 and came out of the tube and taut one of his vine like arms and grabbed Kamek."Hey!Let go you foul beast!I never said touch I said obey!Obey you ingrate!Demanded Kamek."No you stay out of my way!This world is mine now!"yelled Piranha-X54 and tightened Kamek a little more."Gah!What..else..do..you...want?Y ou aren't even supposed to be like this!Looks like I overwhelmed you with so much power that you've gone against me!But to say the truth I'm proud because really,you were actually supposed to be the very first piranha plant to be created but Bowser didn't like you made his own version therefore you are a mere prototype!After all,you weren't that cool looking either!I think petey looked better than you but petey has seen better days he's now burnt ash after Mario took care of him!"explained Kamek."So...you mean I am a prototype,a nothing?"asked Piranha-X54."Well...yes and if you get rid of me you won't survive in the world alone!Mario will eventually get you and burn you down."said Kamek."No!If you have survived this long and now I am stronger than you I will live longer and stronger than you right?"asked Piranha-X54."Well sort of but you still will not survive!"yelled Kamek."Oh really?"asked Piranha-X54 in a clever manner and threw Kamek in through the roof and into the sky."Ahhh!I'll get you!You despicable prototype!"yelled Kamek as his voice got lower."Now!Onto world domination!HaHaHaHaHaHa!"laughed Piranha-X54 in a very evil way and escapes through the door and thinks to himself"Who is this Mario character?Is he stronger than I am is he like me or is he like Kamek?Will he assist me on world domination or will he try to destroy me?So many questions for this world that I plan to dominate am I up for it?I must find allies first perhaps then I may begin."Piranha-X54 then jumps out of the castle and goes undergrounds and walks through tunnels.

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Comments

FUCK YOU

Congratulations on your new baby dude!

^
This guy told the truth; 'cept no one wants to fuck a pasty white basement-dweller.

You ok?

I also forgot:

Your school failed in teaching you grammar. You're mom's a great teacher though, she's tight as a virgin.

Good day sir

i gotta ask general
what happened to ling?
i think he became evil later on in the anime

ling...ling oh Ling...I believe his want for immortalness got the better of him and he becomes the new greed.

oh
and yeah
i meant to say manga
hehe
not comics

you never said comics...

cool story bro, i want to see more, oh by the way, congrats on becoming a member of the script shop, I've got a few scripts in there.

thank you I like your scripts too

Cool. I gotta write something else though...I'm getting smoked by GWS there...

lol he's a good writer.

thanks bro, have you checked the shop lately, I added your script to it?

oh yeah I did

hmm..
so that's why he has the ultimate sheild and stuff
hmm
was he posessed or somthing?

so
when are we going to start with the manga stuff?
we should get another ally for this one

Like I said his want for immortality got the better of him and he got drawed into it.

Hey dude, so you started writing the second one yet? chapter two.

yeah I'm starting today but I'm going to a festival now

I edited my post again, check it out if you want.

okay

hmmm
oh right
humonculus doesn't have souls

there you go

tl;dr

I don't understand.

Thanks for what you aid about my script

np dude.